The Anatomy of Email: Subject Lines

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Subject lines are what get you the opens. There is lots of advice about subject lines and it is the most popular bit of an email to test, this is so you get to find out what works for you.  Here are some key takeaways for you to help your email marketing out…

  • Length
    Most people say to keep it fairly short. Mainly to help with the many different interfaces your email could be viewed in. People also have very short attention spans so remember that if it’s too long they won’t bother reading it, and the chances are that means they won’t bother opening your email.
  • Caps
    Don’t do it all in caps, that’s shouting.  It gets you a spam warning in Spam Assassin.  Some people don’t like it when you capitalise the first letter of every word either because it can be viewed as bad English.  It’s not worth messing around so just write the sentence normally.
  • Brand name
    It is optional whether or not to put your brand name in the subject line. It’ll be in the from field but some interfaces put the subject line on the left and the from name on the right, so if you do want to include your brand some people like to put it in there to make sure it gets seen first. In fact a recent study showed up to an 89% increase in social sharing of email as a result of a brand name being included in the subject line.
  • Accuracy
    Ask yourself ‘Does the subject actually match the reason for the email?’ Whilst saying ‘Free iPad’ will get the email opened – not offering a free iPad will get you junked shortly afterwards.
  • Relevance
    Does it show relevance to the recipient?  Will they be motivated to open the email – they should be otherwise you are fighting a losing battle from the off.
  • Punch
    This is something that goes hand in hand with the length of the subject line and the reason for the email. Punchy titles and subjects catch the attention and tend to get an action.
  • Novelty
    Novelty value is clearly not something you can add consistently to your emails because then they would never be novel!  Every so often though it’s good to think a little bit outside the box to make sure your recipients don’t get into a de-prioritising pattern. When they pretty much know exactly what your subject lines will say; they know it’s relevant but they’ll read it later. Something novel can get you back to the instant opener status.

If you are interested in finding out more about subject lines then you can click here to download Professor Bairstow’s comprehensive guide. Look out for the next blog in the Email Anatomy series which will be all about the from name, preview pane appearance and pre headers.

About the author

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Andy Thorpe is the Deliverability and Compliance Manager for Pure360 and is also the author of Get in the Inbox , where Andy blogs and tweets about email marketing under his comical alias of Captain Inbox.

Progressive email marketing company Pure360 provides email & sms marketing services to customers such as innocent drinks, Seatwave, The FT Group, Rightmove, Zoopla and LA Fitness. With their intuitive tools and the largest customer support team in the UK, they help over 2,000 brands get better with every campaign.

7 Comments

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    Very good points, Andy.

    Whether we’re writing a subject line, a comment or a white paper, it should always be rich with relevance, proof and value. Without these, and a promise of something interesting in the body of your email, you’re wasting your time and that of your prospects and customers.

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    Bettina says:

    Great tips Andy – something else to keep in mind when crafting your subject line is avoiding symbols:

    $$$ = Spam Box Death

    You can read more about it in our http://www.EmailMarketing.Net blog post “Why symbols will not make you money” at: http://www.emailmarketing.net/blog/why-symbols-will-not-make-you-money/2010/11/05/

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    If you are offering a coupon code, include that in the subject as well if possible. We saw in increase in opens from our retail clients when they tried that.

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